I had to practice not including descriptive words and phrases and instead create a sophisticated manner. This was perhaps the perfect example of how one can grow as a writer. When I started writing the first section, as mentioned before, it was difficult. However, during the ten we had to write, writing became easier and easier. When it was finally over, I felt defeated but victorious. Perhaps I had overcome one of the most difficult writing assignments I had faced. The blood and courage I put into writing definitely paid off with a 198/200. This however was not without its shortcomings. The paper seemed to be a clear example of how I felt when I finished writing. Through the hard work I put into the paper and that feeling of defeat was also in the paper. I only had one unclear paragraph and some useless, yet minor, quotes. This was yet another triumph to put into my continued growth